Raeldor's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Cabin]

Great writing and good questions and points made!

DeSaGames responds:

Thanks!
This game isn't too heavy on the narrative so I was a bit irked by the script but it's good to hear people are enjoying it!

[The Paradoxical House]

I like the idea and the unease that the game gives and I would like to see more content in it.

But I have to talk about the bad things too.

-The graphics are not coherent, the floor tiles have better resolution than everything else, and the character is the most noticable in that aspect. It would have been nice keep everything on the same pixel scale.

-The game is a good start but I think it really needs more interactions, and level complexity, the house is empty for the most part.

And finally about the performance, I didn't notice it, It runs well for me, maybe if i have a youtube video on the background the game slows a little. If you are concerned about that I'd recommend to check the global game settings on the GMS and tweak the texture pages option (in the HTML5 page)

JaxDrumm responds:

Hi - Thanks for the very in-depth response! I appreciate it a lot! :)

I won't lie, I did rush this game more than I intended. I do plan on expanding on it though! Thanks for playing my game! :)

[Run Block Run 2 Alpha Test Demo]

What stands out at least for me is the music, fantastic music.

And the gameplay is solid, what I would change is the graphics, making sprites for the character and the collectibles, because it is a little bland, and after a while those bright colors hurt my eyes.

Still, great demo.

Flame152 responds:

Thanks :)
A lot of people have told me to upgrade the graphics when i uplouded Run Block Run 1
soo what to make better for the graphics?

[Blind Typer]

The game is fine and engaging, but I think there is some bugs on the letter levels, like the girl robot says Q and C at the same time or the speech looks like is cut out at the begginging making it a little difficult to understand correctly. The other modes are okay.

Munguia responds:

Thank you, i used your API for medals, works ok, :)

[Bacteria]

Great game!, I loved every level, and I understand why you didn't put that blue boss, it's very long and any mistakes makes you start over, but still I think I found one bug In that boss, looks like that some hits can miss him making it ubeatable at the end, or I'm missing something I have to do In de "saw" part, I shoot both eyes but there is nothing left to do :S.

Well great game, and full of secrets, I love that on games!

[Platforman[DEMO]]

Great aesthetic and I love the music too. I'ts a shame that you cannot develop this game longer. I hope that you have time or the desire to redo the game from scratch would be awesome. I want to see more of this!

[Don't touch the planet!]

I touched the planet.

At least this Cyberix3D game isn't a broken mess (like the others I tried).

I like the idea and the platforming of the game, I hope you expand on it because it felt a little too short.

Demastudios responds:

Hey had said not to touch the planet!
However thanks for the vote and the comment!

[Asteroid Runner]

Good first game!

On a general note every part of the game is well made, the music is athmosferic and fits the space theme, the aesthetic is good too, I like it a lot, but maybe you should get some shadows on the objects, and I would love more things happening in the game, maybe divide it with levels, with increasing difficulty, etc...

Only one complain, If a bullet destroys an asteroid, all the bullets that are on screen get destroyed too.

[JizzQuest - Legend of the twins Delux]

I love the style of this game!
My only complain is that I recomend to put a mute button, I'm used to listen to podcasts when I play in newgrounds unless I really need to listen the game or the soundtrack is great it's not bad but too loud maybe.

P.D: What engine did you do the game? If I can ask, because I feel the game has a very tight and responsive controls and a good performance.

OzzieHP responds:

thanks! I used construct 2 to make the game https://www.scirra.com/construct2

[update smart rebound]

Hey, much better than the previous one, but I miss more levels, it's a very short game but fun anyways!

Still, I think it's better to update te previous one and announce everywhere you can that you updated the game, because, even if I vote positively it's not a good practice to publish the same game twice. :S

tristababy responds:

ok,thank you for your kindly suggestion! :)